Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibilities for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
① The aid from developed countries is of great benefit to common people in needy countries. International aid optimizes people’s living standard and eradicates poverty in the poor countries.
点评：needy 一词代替了原文中的poorer, optimize为词汇的亮点，意为“使得更加完善”。
② The aid from rich countries provides good medical care and helps promote the development of education, agriculture and economy.
③ Mutual assistance enhances friendship between countries, which helps get rid of the possibility of wars due to misunderstanding.
点评：enhance一词在雅思作文中会经常用到，比如：enhance efficiency; enhance security; enhance sense of solidarity.
① Financial aid from rich countries is often given out of political reasons. If you want to receive the aid, you have to accept political conditions combined with it.
② Aid from rich countries is just a disguised way to exploit cheap natural resources and get great benefits from poverty-stricken countries。