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雅思图表作文如何得满分

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  授之于鱼不如授之于渔,今天朗阁雅思培训教师就亲自为大家传授获得雅思图表作文满分的构思过程和满分雅思作文的实例解析,一起来看下吧。

  The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

  Percentage of national consumer expenditure by category - 2002

  构思过程:

  I know that I can write a short introduction by paraphrasing the question.

  I look for an overall trend. I can see that the food/drinks/tobacco category has the highest percentages, and leisure/education has the lowest.

  Now I want to write two main body paragraphs. I need to select something to say about each country. Remember, there is no rule about what information you select; everyone will do this differently.

  I look for the highest figures in each category: I can see that Turkey has the highest figure for food/drinks/tobacco AND for education/leisure. Italy has the highest figure for clothing/footwear.

  So, I''ll write a paragraph about Turkey and Italy.

  My final paragraph needs to talk about Ireland, Spain and Sweden.

  Maybe I''ll point out that Ireland has a high figure for the first category, Spain has the lowest figure for education/leisure, and Sweden has the lowest figures for the first AND second categories.

  I don''t need a conclusion because I have already mentioned a general trend in point 2.

  满分范文:

  The table shows percentages of consumer expenditure for three categories of products and services in five countries in 2002.

  It is clear that the largest proportion of consumer spending in each country went on food, drinks and tobacco. On the other hand, the leisure/education category has the lowest percentages in the table.

  Out of the five countries, consumer spending on food, drinks and tobacco was noticeably higher in Turkey, at 32.14%, and Ireland, at nearly 29%. The proportion of spending on leisure and education was also highest in Turkey, at 4.35%, while expenditure on clothing and footwear was significantly higher in Italy, at 9%, than in any of the other countries.

  It can be seen that Sweden had the lowest percentages of national consumer expenditure for food/drinks/tobacco and for clothing/footwear, at nearly 16% and just over 5% respectively. Spain had slightly higher figures for these categories, but the lowest figure for leisure/education, at only 1.98%.
 

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