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浅析雅思议论文的论证方法(下)

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一方面,对于绝大多数考生而言,完成议论文正文的论证部分并不容易:他们的作文明显表现出论证单薄﹑内容空洞等问题。另一方面,写作的评分标准中有两项针对考生论证实力的检测,分别为写作任务的完成度和表达的连贯统一性。

     三.对比论证

 

   对比论证的方法,主要适用于考题中出现两个对象比较的情况。从操作性上看,对比论证较为方便。论证对比的角度,只需从考题中的两个对象入手即可。

 

   1. 常见表达方式

   ① 关联词

   In contrast, by comparison, on the other hand, just as, similarly

   ② 句型

   Compared with …, …

   While/whereas…, …

   ③ 形容词的比较级

   在不同的考题中,如果出现两个对象的比较,一般在对比论证中都会有一些形容词的比较级出现。考生应根据不同的话题选择不同的词汇。

 

   2. 范例评析

   剑桥雅思考试全真试题8 Test 2

   题目:Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

 

   *范文选段:

   However, learning to understand and share the value system of a whole society cannot be achieved just in the home. Once a child goes to school, they are entering a wider community where teachers and peers will have just as much influence as their parents do at home. At school, children will experience working and living with people from whole variety of backgrounds for the wider society. This experience should teach them how to cooperate with each other and how to contribute to the life of their community.

 

   点评:这道题的主题为宝贝社会意识的教育与培养是靠家庭还是靠学校。*在论证学校的教育义务时,着重强调了:相比较家庭,“teachers and peers will have just as much influence as their parents do at home”。学校中的老师和同学对宝贝社会意识的培养有相同的影响力。而且,在学校相比较在家,“experience working and living with people from whole variety of backgrounds for the wider society”。宝贝接触的*更大,人的类型更多。正所谓,公正合理两方面,对比论证出真知。

 

 

   四.引用论证

 

   引用论证,是较为考验考生知识储备的一种论证方法。引用论证,一般引用名人名言﹑数据,研究成果﹑*刊物,它能够增加论证的可信度和性。

 

   但是,这种论证方法较容易被考生误用或滥用,很多考生没有知识储备就自己捏造一些名言或数据。较夸张的是有时所谓名言却出现语法错误,所谓数据却不合情理甚至荒谬。

 

   因此,朗阁海外考试研究中心建议考生们在备考时适当准备几句名言警句,如果能在考试中用上较好,如果不能那就使用前面介绍的几种论证方法。但是,对于知识面较广,语言水平较高的考生,完全可以使用引用论证,这样不仅能增强论证的感也能展现自己的优势。

 

   1. 常见表达方式

   According to a recent study, according to a recent article published in …, according to a recent survey conducted by…,

   A recent study/survey found that…

   A recent opinion poll revealed that …

 

   2. 范例评析

   剑桥雅思考试全真试题5 Test4

   题目: Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?

 

   *范文选段:

   Today the way we consider human psychology and mental development is heavily influenced by the genetic sciences. Research, relating to identical twins, has highlighted how significant inherited characteristics can be for an individual’s life.

 

   点评:这道题的主题是先天还是后天决定人的性格和发展,*的这段论证主要是*先天的影响更大些,引用了一个有关双胞胎的研究。对研究发现的引用使得句的论点没有那么苍白无力。但是,通过翻看剑桥系列丛书,不难发现引用论证在*的范文中的使用可以用基本罕见来形容。正所谓,引用论证用得少,粗制滥造没必要。

 

 

   五.总结论证

 

   实际上,总结论证是解决论证过程中无话可说的应急策略。它的位置一定是放在正文段的较后一句,总结整个段落的内容。虽然这种方法有一定作用,但朗阁海外考试研究中心并不建议考生多用,一篇文章用一次就足以了,用多了就会产生凑字数的嫌疑。

 

   1. 常见表达方式

   It can be concluded that …

   It is little wondering that…

   There is no exaggeration that …

   It is logical to conclude that …

   It is no exaggeration to say that …

 

   2. 范例评析

   剑桥雅思考试全真试题6 Test B

   题目: Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree?

 

   *范文选段:

   In spite of this, the obvious benefits of computer skills for young children cannot be denied. Their adult world will be changing constantly in terms of technology and the Internet is the key to all the knowledge and information available in the world today. Therefore, it is im

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