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雅思写作 10大失败开头案例解析

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雅思写作,下面这10大失败的开头,烤鸭们千万别用啊

 

     雅思写作,下面这10大失败的开头,烤鸭们千万别用啊

 

失败开头之一:不说重点(喷血指数:☆☆☆☆)

 

典型失败案例: Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?

This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

修改方案:开门见山 直奔主题

In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married

Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information?

Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.

Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection

Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!

 

失败开头之二:中式英文人见人晕 (喷血指数: 雅思 写作 失败开头

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