2019年10月10日雅思写作A类考题回顾

类别

Map

题目

The maps below show the development of Kelsbey village from 1780 to 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

题目翻译

该图描述了kelsbey村庄从1780年到2000年间的改变。

选取主要的特征对信息进行概括，在相关的地方进行比较。

写作指导

1. 注意时态，时间发生在过去，要用一般过去时。

2. 考生们在写作时可以按照时间顺序进行，每个图形在描述时注意方位顺序的一致性。

写作范文

The maps illustrate how Kelsbey village changed over the 220 years spanning from 1780 to 2000.

In 1780, at the northeast corner of Kelsbey village lay a residential zone with 100 homes. Not far from the residence there were four pieces of farmland and a large expanse of woods. A small river ran from north to south in the west.

The following eight decades witnessed the doubling of homes in the residence, while the amount of farmland and woods was reduced to half. A newly-constructed road linking the residence to the river could be seen, and there was a new bridge over the river as well.

140 years later, the number of homes continued to soar up to 500. The original farmland and woods totally disappeared and were replaced by a newly-built road, at the south end of which two school campuses and three sports fields were equipped for locals to get educated and participate in sports activities. Moving westwards, one can see a row of shops launched recently at the eastside of the river. And at the downstream of the river, a wetland was established for birds.

题目评价

难度一般

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近期考试趋势

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类别

教育类/犯罪类

题目

The best way to reduce the increasing crime rate of young offenders is to educate parents about better parenting skills.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

题目翻译

减少青少年犯罪的较佳方法是教给父母更好的育儿方式。

从某种程度上来说，你同意还是不同意？

写作指导

1. 注意时态，不要出现过去时（除非举过去的例子）

2. 老题新出，犯罪类和教育类的混考。常考的是青少年犯罪日益增多，原因以及解决方法。其实啊，写出的supporting sentences相差并不大。

推荐立场：该题所提及到的现象是青少年犯罪的日益增多，旨在提出该问题的解决方式。烤鸭们不难发现，此题的破题点在于弱化*词，家长的教育固然重要，但并不一定是较好的方法。

推荐思路：四段式

Opening: 背景介绍，表达观点

Body1: 让步，承认好的家长教育确实对宝贝有引导作用，对于扼制青少年犯罪定是有重要意义的。

Body2: 反驳，提出这并非是*方式。或者也可指出该方法的可行性不高，虽然教了家长很多的教育方式，但是家长工作压力大，工作时间长，给小孩儿的陪伴并不多，给到的教育自然也就少。烤鸭们也可以指出其他的减少青少年犯罪的方法，例如立法机构进步青少年犯罪的惩罚；老师和学校给更好的教育；解决贫富差距的根本问题；媒体暴力误导的把控。

Conclusion: 重申立场，总结观点，做适当展望

写作范文

Youngsters in a mounting number embark on the criminal road, which has aroused so much concern over the public, from organized crime-experts to separate ordinary individuals. When some people advocate that teaching parents good parenting skills is the best way to reduce crime rate, I doubt whether such method will make sense or not.

Admittedly, good parenting skill is an effective way to prevent their next generation from delinquency. Many parents these days know little about how to communicate with their children, especially teenagers. Providing communicating-skill training, parents are inclined to understand the needs and desires of the children and take preemptive steps to stop any tendency to commit crimes. For instance, instead of spending most of their free time on the Internet chatting with their friends or playing a game, youngsters would like to join small chats with their parents or participate in other family activities. Such activities will definitely eliminate the possibility to indulge in destructive behaviors such as taking drugs and theft.

However, confronted with soaring working pressure, parents can hardly have the opportunity to offer much supervision or instruction to their children. Additionally, with little company, it is unlikely for them to establish harmonious and close relationships with younger generation. Therefore, alternatives to reverse the increasing rate of young offenders are welcome. For one thing, teachers and schools have significant roles to enable children to distinguish between right and wrong. For another, stricter supervision of the media is in need. Pornographic shows, video violence and something like blood and gore should be banned in daily TV shows that young people can access easily.

To sum up, better parenting skills provided for parents can strike down the steps of growing young criminals. However, such method is not the most effective one – conversely, the blend of assistance from various aspects will be much more optimal.

题目评价

老题新出，难度不大

近期考试趋势

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